In the first two essays we’ve written in this class I have similar mistakes in both. Three of the major problems that both essays have in common would be my abruptness, organization, and the awkward phrasing in some of my sentences. I think these three problems are a major factor in writing a decent essay. These errors might make it difficult for readers to follow my essays and be able to understand the point I am trying to make. In the future, I think I should keep going to someone to read my essay and make sure that it makes sense. By doing that, they are going to be able to notice the sentences that don’t really make sense and point them out so that I could fix it.
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