For my portfolio I chose the revise my arguing a position essay. Two strengths I had in my essay were that I had a clear stated thesis and reason to back up my thesis. Weakness’s that were in my essay were my organization of my paragraphs as well evidence to support my reasoning’s.
In order to revise my essay, I am going to work on better phrasing my sentences and taking out other sentences and ideas that are irrelevant. I also have to reorganize the order in which my paragraphs are in. A good strategy I can use would be writing a summary of each paragraph to make sure the point I am trying to make makes sense and is easy to follow.
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